Balance of Power, GP5, metal/rock crit for crit


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hardcoreatheist
12-22-2006, 07:46 PM
Something I wrote for my old band a while back. They really liked it, just thought I'd see what other people think. Thanks in advance.

rustic_metal
12-22-2006, 07:55 PM
this is pretty good. only thing id say is the rests near the start are a bit long...

is it just me or does verse one sound alot like a folk song?

hardcoreatheist
12-22-2006, 08:08 PM
hahaha never looked at it like that...my old band thought the verses sounded like something off final fantasy. Wasn't my intention but, nm.

Albarranator
12-22-2006, 08:29 PM
Hey man, It's pretty good. I really like what you do with the bass guitar in the Chorus. And the drums in the Verse 3, it's great. 8/10 I think.

Stobbeez
12-23-2006, 10:27 AM
I thought it was really cool, and I liked the different 'themes' I guess you could say.. starting at around verse 3, and it sort of went back to the original theme of the song eventually. Nice work.

vonfeldt7
12-23-2006, 02:46 PM
i liked it all, except for the part where it made me feel like the songs i write suck..

nice job

NovemberRain273
12-24-2006, 01:45 AM
Its pretty good, youve got a lot of cool harmonies and riff ideas, though it kinda bored me at times. I think it was the drums. They cant be just ffollowing the beat of the guitars, or else there wont be any real difference between them.

hardcoreatheist
12-24-2006, 07:50 AM
Thanks NovemberRain273, I'll work on that. :)

I was also thinking maybe I should streamline it a bit. Get rid of some bits that aren't really necessary, like cut down the verses a bit.