Return of the Master [Master of Puppets II]


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IXI Streak IXI
12-26-2006, 04:36 AM
I decided to mess around and make a remix/sequel to Master of Puppets. This is all I have tabbed down so far. I wrote something up to the chorus. I will be adding more soon. Tell me what you think of this now.



Intro
d||--------------------------5--5---||
A||-7-----6-----5-----4------3--3---||
E||---0-0---0-0---0-0---0-0---------||

d||---------------------------------||
A||---------------------------------||
E||-7-0-0-6-0-0-5-0-0-4-0-0-3-0-2-0-||

Fig 1 [Repeat 2x]
d||-----------------2---------------||
A||-----2-----3-----------3-----2\3-||
E||-0-1---0-1---0-1---0-1---0-1-----||

d||-----------------2-----------4---||
A||-----2-----3-----------3-----2---||
E||-0-1---0-1---0-1---0-1---0-1-----||

d||-----------------2---------------||
A||-----2-----3-----------3-----2\3-||
E||-0-1---0-1---0-1---0-1---0-1-----||

d||-----------------2-----------||
A||-----2-----3-----------3-----||
E||-0-1---0-1---0-1---0-1---0-0-||

d||-----------------||
A||-----------------||
E||-3/2-0-3/2-0-3/2-||

TheDarkestNights
12-26-2006, 12:23 PM
Put it in Powertab.

And looks like you're about to butcher a good song with a crap part 2, but Powertab it and prove me wrong.

IXI Streak IXI
12-26-2006, 01:19 PM
K, updated. Here's a Powertab of it. What d'ya think of it?

cool#9
12-26-2006, 01:36 PM
two things, where do you get the privalege to write the sequel to that song, and you did butcher it sadly

IXI Streak IXI
12-26-2006, 01:38 PM
It's not an official sequel, dude. I'm pretty sure it was butchered mainly because I've only been playing for a year, but whatever. It's not going to be as good as Metallica's original. I'm pretty sure nothing's gonna match the original but hey, at least I'm tryin'.

Nunwhxre 666
12-26-2006, 02:18 PM
This isn't even a part II. This is part one with a few changed notes.

IXI Streak IXI
12-26-2006, 02:46 PM
This is just the intro. I plan on changing mostly everything. I just wanted to have bits and pieces of part 1 in it so that people could recognize it. I'm going to go into chord progressions and scales and shit.

f12button
12-26-2006, 04:09 PM
Guys...constructive criticism. Try not to flame :P

I don't think anyone's going to appreciate a sequel/part 2/modification to this song, since it's such a famous song. Especially for guitarists. No one likes change.

Plus, the original is stuck in everyone's head, so if they hear anything with the title "Master of Puppets," they're only going to remember the original, you know what i mean?

I can't really crit anything about this, especially since i'm not sure about it.

IAMIDY
12-27-2006, 03:06 AM
It's not going to be as good as Metallica's original. I'm pretty sure nothing's gonna match the original but hey, at least I'm tryin'.
Damn right nothing'll match the original.

Inspired_by_Vai
12-28-2006, 07:24 AM
I agree with f12button, but its a good start. the only problem is, its so similar to the original that it just sounds like your playing the original verion wrong :(

But keep working on it, its a very good idea ;)

IXI Streak IXI
12-28-2006, 12:18 PM
I agree with f12button, but its a good start. the only problem is, its so similar to the original that it just sounds like your playing the original verion wrong :(

But keep working on it, its a very good idea ;)

Thanks for the crit. I felt as though it was too close to the original too. Any suggestions on where I could take it?

Inspired_by_Vai
12-28-2006, 02:47 PM
Try to play around more with the idea, keep to similar scales (Minor Pentatonics, natural minor)
but try to move away from ideas that are too similar to the original. Look outside the box :cheers:

IXI Streak IXI
12-28-2006, 09:52 PM
Gotcha. I'll mess with it.

Inspired_by_Vai
12-29-2006, 07:55 AM
Gotcha. I'll mess with it.

Glad to help :p:

Crit my idea?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=492838

Haha, Crackhead
12-30-2006, 04:04 PM
If you're gonna rip-off the original, which you're pretty much doing, at least do it right. All the slides should be legato.

FlippinPeteeVee
12-31-2006, 08:50 PM
snort coke and try again
its about a coke addiction anyhow
get a first hand look

IXI Streak IXI
01-01-2007, 02:07 PM
Lol. It's about someone else's coke addiction. I should get a friend and give him some coke, get mad at him and write about it.

Evil_Magician
01-01-2007, 02:15 PM
Just dont put it on your site or anything because Metallica will sue your ass.
They sued a band for using a E-F progression .

Oh and you realy butchered the song man.

rusty shackman
01-01-2007, 05:28 PM
it's pretty boring and non innovative, honestly, but there were some parts i like if i just pretend that it's not almost the same thing as the original song. i thought the first four bars of fig. 1 were pretty cool, but the last one has nothing interesting at all.

crit mine please? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=495711