[GP5] Keeper of Dreams


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01-01-2007, 08:06 AM
Yet another attempt at songwriting by me, I hope I did better this time. Please tell me what do you think.

I know it might be a bit repetitive, but I guess it won't sound that way with the vocals.

01-01-2007, 11:46 AM
I think the way the rhythm of the keyboard and the rhythm of the other instruments clashes

Liam Efting
01-01-2007, 02:23 PM
That kind of hurt my ears to listen to.

You need to learn some theory and techinque when it comes to string arrangement, it sounds much better if you do realistic sounding strings rather than 80's sounding string runs.

The timing is way off between all the instruments. Not cool.

You could easily make something good here, just put some effort into it.

01-01-2007, 10:19 PM
yeah, i agree the timing was of on some parts, the keyboard at the begining repeated it self too much for my liking, you could definatly make this into a better song,