[GPro, MIDI] The Emptiness Inside Me


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GiantRaven
01-01-2007, 02:36 PM
Opinions anyone?

Ignore the Bass bit in the middle, there should be a solo there but i'm not that good at writing stuff like that

Liam Efting
01-01-2007, 02:59 PM
Not too shabby, I like some of the harmonised licks in there.

I could write a solo for you if you'd like?

GiantRaven
01-01-2007, 03:03 PM
Not too shabby, I like some of the harmonised licks in there.

I could write a solo for you if you'd like?
Go for it :D

Alternate_rock
01-01-2007, 10:28 PM
even with out the solo in there i still liked that. though, some of the time i almost didnt pay attention to it, it just didnt keep my attention. And i hate the way you ended the song, it has nothing to do with the chords or anything, its just fading out, i hate that ending. but other than that its good.

GiantRaven
01-01-2007, 11:08 PM
even with out the solo in there i still liked that. though, some of the time i almost didnt pay attention to it, it just didnt keep my attention. And i hate the way you ended the song, it has nothing to do with the chords or anything, its just fading out, i hate that ending. but other than that its good.
Heh, thats a lack of an idea of how to end it :p:

Deadunite
01-02-2007, 01:11 AM
nice song man i like it..u should put some guitar solo..
i have edit ur song and i put solo... :D

GiantRaven
01-02-2007, 12:15 PM
You put the first solo over where there should be lyrics :p:

The second one is cool at the start, but I hate it when theres just 8th notes, thanks though :)

ctb
01-02-2007, 01:04 PM
I like the flow of it all (though I didn't really listen to it all). I actually liked that bass bit by itself :p:

RedDeath9
01-04-2007, 03:33 PM
The intro is alright, but I didn't really like bars 11 - 14. The next part is pretty cool though.

Nice bass at 63, the drums during that part are pretty good also. I didn't really like the ending...

It was kind of boring for my tastes, but still good.

6.5/10

xDie_Romanticx
01-07-2007, 11:37 PM
sweet i like the beginning