[GPro, MIDI] The Emptiness Inside Me

[GiantRaven]

Opinions anyone?

Ignore the Bass bit in the middle, there should be a solo there but i'm not that good at writing stuff like that

[Liam Efting]

Not too shabby, I like some of the harmonised licks in there.

I could write a solo for you if you'd like?

[GiantRaven]

Not too shabby, I like some of the harmonised licks in there.

I could write a solo for you if you'd like?
Go for it :D

[Alternate_rock]

even with out the solo in there i still liked that. though, some of the time i almost didnt pay attention to it, it just didnt keep my attention. And i hate the way you ended the song, it has nothing to do with the chords or anything, its just fading out, i hate that ending. but other than that its good.

[GiantRaven]

even with out the solo in there i still liked that. though, some of the time i almost didnt pay attention to it, it just didnt keep my attention. And i hate the way you ended the song, it has nothing to do with the chords or anything, its just fading out, i hate that ending. but other than that its good.
Heh, thats a lack of an idea of how to end it :p:

[Deadunite]

nice song man i like it..u should put some guitar solo..
i have edit ur song and i put solo... :D

[GiantRaven]

You put the first solo over where there should be lyrics :p:

The second one is cool at the start, but I hate it when theres just 8th notes, thanks though :)

[ctb]

I like the flow of it all (though I didn't really listen to it all). I actually liked that bass bit by itself :p:

[RedDeath9]

The intro is alright, but I didn't really like bars 11 - 14. The next part is pretty cool though.

Nice bass at 63, the drums during that part are pretty good also. I didn't really like the ending...

It was kind of boring for my tastes, but still good.

6.5/10

[xDie_Romanticx]

sweet i like the beginning