what do you ythink of this intro


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SOAD1983
01-03-2007, 12:10 AM
me and my bother are working at it it have to be a song (first song we made) but i dont know what do to next :s

rate pls :D


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ROCK=ZEPPELIN
01-03-2007, 12:17 AM
eh, its alright. Pretty good for a first try. But it just seems a little boring to me. Are you going to add some bass or drums to the intro, because right now it just seems like its missing something, maybe just too "thin".

SOAD1983
01-03-2007, 06:10 PM
that is playd whit 2 guitars and we only did the guitar part atm

but i dont know what do do know some tips of guitar tabs or something pls


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SOAD1983
01-05-2007, 08:49 PM
can somezbody help me whit it pls.

lackofcolor
01-06-2007, 02:53 AM
Its actually not that bad

Guitar-God-Elf
01-06-2007, 06:40 AM
sorri for being blunt but i found it reli boring maybe change the second riff when the second guitar comes in to add variation
add some drums, also a groovy bass line id be intrested to see how this turns out