Metal Influenced Song (GP4)


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the_crimison
01-03-2007, 10:56 AM
This is my first full song, the Armageddon.

Cheesy song title and emo vocals, okay, i have alot of influence from that. Drums aren't great but yeah.

Critisisms are warmly welcome.

face_haver
01-04-2007, 07:10 AM
Solo came in too early. And possibly too many solos. Otherwise good keep working on the drums. Also crit mine

slash have a look at the drums
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=496056 There's 5 songs

Snipy
01-04-2007, 08:09 AM
I liked it, nice riffs, but I didn't really like the solo.

Crit mine? Check my sig :)

ctb
01-04-2007, 02:19 PM
It was really good but I started to get a little bit bored, but that's just my view I suppose. 7.5/10

Telestar
07-04-2007, 02:19 PM
The solos just need a little more umph. I dont understand why the drums stopped in the beginning of solo 2. Also change the solo note in measure 76 and 80. Song Just needs a little work. 7.5/10