[GP4/5/Midi] Time is Running Out
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01-04-2007, 11:55 AM
Hey guys, I've decided I'm going to make a solo album, well of Guitar Pro files of music I will create. This is my first track - TIRO (Time is Running Out). ALl comments welcomed. Constructive Criticism please, no flaming!
And Enjoy ;)
Donkey Kong Edit: Haven't added drums in yet since it is work in progress. Also, I wanted this to be a short song, hence the name 'Time is Running Out'.
Edit 2: I will probably add in another chorus and vere, this is just a basis.
Woah that so interesting, it sounds like a fiddle and I love the rhythm of it too.
01-04-2007, 01:00 PM
:P Thanks. Anybody else wanna see what it's like?
Oh and ctb I'll crit your Metalcore song.
01-05-2007, 07:06 AM
Ha, catchy. Reminds me of Bumblefoot. Uhh, not much to fault to be honest. The bass could be a little more adventurous, instead of just following the guitar. In all honestly though what you have thus far is very good and catchy. Looking forward to a final product.
Crit for crit? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=498339 Ta.
01-05-2007, 07:41 AM
Thnks for the comments SForbz. I've critted yours. ANybody else want to crit mine?
01-05-2007, 11:07 AM
It's not bad
it's different to say the least
not too keen on the pre-chorus but once u've finished it, u'll have something good there.
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