Fall of Man

[puppetzmaster8]

Here's a metal song that I've been working on for about a week on and off. Now, it's not finished yet (its about 5 minutes long now) , but I wanted to see if I could get any criticism on what I have now. I'll update it again as I continue and eventually finish it. Feel free to post your songs as well and I'll take a listen to them.

[ouchies]

That was sweet. Finish it please !


the intro got boring, but with the vocals it should be fine.

[ctb]

That was really good, I liked it when it came in at 200bpm.

[Blak R Immortal]

that was a pretty tight song man keep it up

[puppetzmaster8]

Ok, so heres a MIDI update. I need an opinion on which one sounds better. I have the original version with the clean interlude, then I have a new version where the clean part has been altered a bit and distorted. Which do you think sounds better? I've also added more to the song, but for right now, I just wanna know which part you guys think sounds better.