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puppetzmaster8
01-06-2007, 01:17 AM
Here's a metal song that I've been working on for about a week on and off. Now, it's not finished yet (its about 5 minutes long now) , but I wanted to see if I could get any criticism on what I have now. I'll update it again as I continue and eventually finish it. Feel free to post your songs as well and I'll take a listen to them.

ouchies
01-06-2007, 04:36 PM
That was sweet. Finish it please !


the intro got boring, but with the vocals it should be fine.

ctb
01-06-2007, 05:28 PM
That was really good, I liked it when it came in at 200bpm.

Blak R Immortal
01-06-2007, 07:21 PM
that was a pretty tight song man keep it up

puppetzmaster8
01-07-2007, 06:57 PM
Ok, so heres a MIDI update. I need an opinion on which one sounds better. I have the original version with the clean interlude, then I have a new version where the clean part has been altered a bit and distorted. Which do you think sounds better? I've also added more to the song, but for right now, I just wanna know which part you guys think sounds better.