LedZeppelin095 vs. Stratkat


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stratkat
01-12-2007, 08:38 PM
Newborn Midnight Eyes

Iím stuck within the morning after
Where the roses in your hands
Seem to be all that I can remember

Because now my shadow can
No longer break the empty space
That rests from the tips of your toes
To the silence that lies beneath
A cold hard floor that hasnít been touched
For weeksÖ

Several shades of auburn
And newborn midnight eyes
Collide

Goodbye


"Fearing the Unknown (Bridge of Time)"

The bridge I'm standing on
feels as narrow as a tight rope
The air makes me choke
When I look forward
all I can see is smoke
but at least I can't see the bottom

I can't turn around or I'll fall
(But I often look behind me)
but I'm to afraid to move ahead
I havn't even tried
It's like I'm paralyzed
with the thought
And I've realized I like it here
or am I just to afraid
of whats up there

stratkat
01-12-2007, 08:41 PM
Green:)

edit: only six min and I'm 4 votes behind.

Crimson_tornado
01-12-2007, 08:42 PM
Green, IMHO

Edit: My girlfriend prefers the orange though

zeppelinpage4
01-12-2007, 08:46 PM
Hard choice, i'll go green.

Jearl
01-12-2007, 09:00 PM
green. very nice

LedZeppelin095
01-12-2007, 09:33 PM
Orange is awesome. :D

circular.parade
01-12-2007, 09:35 PM
Liked the revisions you did. Orange.

Alk 3 addict
01-12-2007, 10:13 PM
Orange.

pinktuxdude
01-13-2007, 01:32 AM
hmm orange, Its more relatable to, and the greens kinda hard to get the meanining of.

stratkat
01-13-2007, 02:58 AM
This is a really good match. More votes please.

nerk13
01-13-2007, 04:00 AM
Green- The metaphors were amazing.

To be honest though, it was very close. I almost went for orange, but decided to reread them both a few more times real quick. Great job to both writers.

Final
01-13-2007, 04:01 AM
Orange.

LedZeppelin095
01-13-2007, 04:04 PM
Whoa...this is realllly close. Good job, strat.

#1 synth
01-13-2007, 04:41 PM
because I like to make things close. Orange.

Made Of Metal
01-13-2007, 04:51 PM
Emo!!!

#1 synth
01-13-2007, 04:51 PM
^lawl

guitarhero_764
01-14-2007, 01:18 PM
I'm gonna have to go with Orange, its easier to understand. Sorry to break the tie =)

Fate_of_Mind
01-14-2007, 01:29 PM
Green :)