MELODIC METAL! [GP4/5, MIDI] Crit4Crit.


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NovemberRain273
02-06-2007, 03:53 PM
Well, I'm in a great mood for writing songs this week :p:

I put a little more effort into this one, added more leads, harmonizing, etc. You'll see :p:

kyucide
02-06-2007, 04:00 PM
I'd love to hear it actually played on guitar...

jammin24
02-06-2007, 04:00 PM
wow thats pretty sick! how did you make it and can you get me a tab cus i really fancy playing it.

blue_strat
02-06-2007, 05:00 PM
nice! :D

would be great to hear it on geetar tho

NovemberRain273
02-06-2007, 05:06 PM
Thanks guys!

Yea, I plan on recording this very soon, probably this week. When I do I'll post the link here.

Snipy
02-07-2007, 01:34 PM
Very nice, specially the acoustic bridges.
It will be great if you make a solo.
9/10

revan1013
02-07-2007, 03:03 PM
I don't think it needs a solo, it's excellent. It reminds me of video game music actually. Really good beat, always something going on, gives a great mood.

Great work. I would listen to this on my own easily. *two thumbs up*

Mine is experimental rock/metal, let me know what you think.

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=520632

Pieceofmind019
02-07-2007, 09:49 PM
Wow that was pretty damn good. The lead lines flowed with the rythem and everynote seemed to have a purpose rather than just showing off what you can do. The solo flowed perfectly and fit right in place.

cant really find anything that needs improving

RPotts
02-08-2007, 06:57 PM
What I like most about this is how many places it could go depending on the vocals. If you added in some Bruce Dickinson vocals it could be a ballady rock opera or something but you could also throw in the death metal singer and it could be this viscous melodic death metal song. A solo could fit in this song, but don't force one, it sounds good as it is. I like the very simple structure and lead lines but they still are a great harmony. Sounds good

8.5 - 9 or so

NovemberRain273
02-09-2007, 04:19 PM
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=520581

You guys can find the recorded version there now :D

6_6_6_1_syn
02-09-2007, 04:54 PM
it was great! the riffs were sweet and the recorded version was sweet!

crit?

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=518653

ch715dallat
02-09-2007, 09:47 PM
That was good but not as good as revolutions or pyreflies. The intro was good but the i didnt like the bends in it, it would be better without them. i liked the verse bit, the second set of riffs? sounded a bit iron maiden. The middle riffs were sweet as. On second thoughts it is as good ast the other 2 songs its just different :) i liked the acoustic in this more than the one in pyreflies as pyreflies one was to slow and you get bored at that bit easy, this was a bit faster paced, but your still an awesome writer man, hopefully il be able write some decent stuff soon once i get a bit more theory under my belt, ive been playin a year and i threw somethin together this week if you dont mind giving your verdict on it, i think its in my sig?