[GP5] Untitled Hard Rock/Metalcore (Crit for Crit!)


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02-07-2007, 06:14 PM
Here's another song I made for my band, but I don't know if we'll use it.
Tell me what you think and what I should change if anything.

02-07-2007, 07:02 PM
post a midi or gp4 file.

02-07-2007, 08:34 PM
well it started out really promising. the intro and verse were both really good, but the chourus was just eh for me. I didnt get the pause at the bridge it might be a vocal part or something but as is is was just kinda a break that lasted to long. The clean part was a good contrast to the song but it needs to be longer. three clean chords just sounded strange. By the time the secong clean part came around i was geting kind of board, if you added a solo i think it would break the repetitiveness up. And i liked the harmony at the ending it was cool

Over all it was good but needes a lot of work 6/10

02-07-2007, 09:44 PM
I completely agree with everything he said...a lot of potential

02-09-2007, 08:51 PM
i loved the main riff it was exactly what i find interesting, some of the later riffs and stuff wasnt as good if you maybe added a solo that would be a sweet ass song, but i would cut out the clean chorus bit IMO