[POWERTAB] kind of really weird.


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Grovermans
02-08-2007, 03:05 AM
okay. so. this one started out as something
not that weird, but then i added keyboard
and i changed up the basslines that i had,
and it turned into something kind of jazzy.
it ended up being pretty weird in the end.
SO. listen. make sure you hear the bass,
because it sounds like crap without it.
and maybe it sounds like crap with it.
i don't know. tell me what you think.

PS: i don't play bass or keyboards, so
i don't know how playable it is on them.

Led_Zeppelin_37
02-08-2007, 03:43 AM
I love it! It was quite interesting and surprising at times. I didn't really like the outro so much, it kinda ended the song abruptly. I think the outro could be effective as an interlude instead.

saddam
02-08-2007, 05:35 AM
I really liked it! It's indeed weird but that's cool! Maybe add a little solo or something (not necessarily on guitar, keyboard solos are neat as well!).

Keep it up!

grtz

HumanitysDeath
02-08-2007, 04:16 PM
Yay Grovermans! Missed ya, bud.

I liked everything overall.
There were several sour sounding notes here and there.
The keyboard worked really well with the guitar. Very well written.
The bass fits just as well, though it doesn't stand out as much as the keys.
I loved the outro. That was a great turnaround.

Aside from the sour notes in places, it sounds great.
Nice work.
And uh. Don't leave us too soon, alright?

Heascase
02-08-2007, 04:43 PM
That was pretty cool :p:

Reminds me of phish a little bit. The structure was awesome also, I never got bored waiting for the verse/chorus/whatever.

Very good overall.

Crit mine if you want

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=521385

Grovermans
02-08-2007, 05:26 PM
Yay Grovermans! Missed ya, bud.

I liked everything overall.
There were several sour sounding notes here and there.
The keyboard worked really well with the guitar. Very well written.
The bass fits just as well, though it doesn't stand out as much as the keys.
I loved the outro. That was a great turnaround.

Aside from the sour notes in places, it sounds great.
Nice work.
And uh. Don't leave us too soon, alright?haha i've been posting off and on for a while.

cool#9
02-08-2007, 05:31 PM
That was pretty cool i must say. Weird, quite so, but that just makes it all the better. Its not something i've heard a thousand times over. Good job!

HumanitysDeath
02-08-2007, 07:33 PM
haha i've been posting off and on for a while.
Yea, and last time you posted a song, I was banned.
I was so sad.

Grovermans
02-08-2007, 07:35 PM
haha aww i'm sorry.

DarkSonata
02-08-2007, 11:52 PM
Another one from Grovermans...I would say i like this one, it made me fell like dancing a little. The keys were good and i agree that the bass makes the song what it is. Very good job to see somethin different yet still good. Give mine a listen if you get a chance...its called frozen oblivion and is in my sig

6_6_6_1_syn
02-09-2007, 12:22 PM
It was good, but the harmonizing seemed a bit off to me...i think it might need to fit a little better. and i just dont know about the overdrive. there were a lot of cool ideas, so id keep at it.

crit?

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=520531

Grovermans
02-09-2007, 06:09 PM
what harmonizing?

Spark1284
02-10-2007, 02:04 PM
fantastic all around, major mars volta vibe tho with the keys and the chord choices. and it may have been a little too repetitive

Grovermans
02-10-2007, 02:07 PM
haha yeah i was wondering if anyone
would see the mars volta influence.

6_6_6_1_syn
02-10-2007, 03:52 PM
ehh...well not "harmonizing" but harmonies...the song may not be intended to have any harmonized parts, but i always favor a little bit of harmony at least, im just one of those guys who freaks out if they hear two notes clash...dont get me wrong, it has lot of potential.

...i wouldnt wioryy too much about it, it could just be me :D