[GP5]Metal/Acoustic Power Metal-ish Crit4Crit
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02-08-2007, 03:49 PM
This is my 6th song i have made on GP5, it is one of my best, i will do a crit for crit.
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02-08-2007, 04:48 PM
Doesn't really seem to have much structure. The riffs by them selfs are good, but I cant really pick out a chorus or verse or anything, ya' know? It's a good start but you need to structure it a little more (unless its going to be an instrumental, then it would be cool).
Not bad, but it needs a bit of work.
02-08-2007, 06:11 PM
The chords at bar 12 sounded very rushed. Bar 26 seemed a bit filler to me. I agree with the post above, it looks like you've just made up a bunch or riffs and chucked them all together. Im all for experimental/progressive stuff, but it just doesnt work if you have no structure at all. I also dont think the acoustic guitar goes well with the distortion guitar.
02-08-2007, 07:37 PM
it is meant to be kinda an instrumental, i dont really like the idea of verse's and chorus's, i will crit yours ASAP.
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