[GP5] Breaking Me (punk-ish) C4C


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USCENDONE BENE
02-17-2007, 12:56 PM
This is a song that i have written recently, so changes will probably be made. I cut out most of the end solo because a lot of it sucked, but the rest of the song sounds good. I tried to make the bass a little more interesting, so tell me what you think ;)

I am happy to crit your stuff if you are willing to crit mine :)

EDIT: See post below for a version with a solo!

ch715dallat
02-17-2007, 05:37 PM
that was great, really really liked the chorus riff. and the small solo fitted perfectly, i loved the bass intro, i suck at writting bass because ive never really played it, but that sounded good, no faults i could pick out really, just need to work on getting some drums on there and youve got a finished song.

MustaineV
02-17-2007, 07:51 PM
I like the ideas, mind if i fiddle with it a bit ? It's screaming for a solo and some drums :D

USCENDONE BENE
02-18-2007, 07:38 AM
^^ sure, go ahead, and please send me a link if you have anything i can Crit :)

USCENDONE BENE
02-18-2007, 02:52 PM
Here is the same song, but with a new solo. It still needs a little work, but hopefully your crit can help me make it better. Enjoy :)