No idea what genre...[GP5/MIDI]


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Thomasoman
02-17-2007, 04:48 PM
Little something I put together yesterday. Crit for crit, o'course. Tell me what you think.

rokr_nathan
02-17-2007, 04:54 PM
First part makes me want to the piano part.

I think it's good. 8/10

Thomasoman
02-17-2007, 07:37 PM
Thanks...anything I could improve?

MustaineV
02-17-2007, 07:48 PM
Change the drum line, i mean kind of destroy it , the music you have there is too good for that blast-beat inspired drum-line.. Very nice music.

I'd suggest trying to vary the intro a little since it's a bit predictable and less musical than the rest of the song. The solo is ok to say the least , but needs to be longer and the rhythm needs to be a little less violent because the song's so mellow.. Keep the lead as aggressive as you want but the rhythm can use a little toning down. Just a thought ;)

Nice work..