Metalcore Buildup (GP5,GP4,Midi)


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02-17-2007, 07:06 PM
Okay so this is a little buildup I just did.... It's not the whole song so please dont say it's short:p: still working on the rest :satan: thx everybody.... C4C

You can crit my other one too please, not much crits :p:!

02-17-2007, 07:08 PM
you havent posted it btw lol?

02-17-2007, 07:13 PM
you havent posted it btw lol?
now yes sry i always do that XD

02-17-2007, 08:52 PM
people saw it but no one crits?? :( :(

02-18-2007, 09:43 AM
anyone wanna crit????

02-18-2007, 05:02 PM
I thought it sounded pretty good except for the acoustic guitar
I listened to it once the way you wrote it, and it sounded ok, then I listened to it again with the acoustic guitar muted and i loved it
I would say shorten the acoustic intro and then take the acoustic guitar out whenever the other guitars come in and it would be really sweet

crit mine?

02-24-2007, 01:15 PM
This is reallllly good, I agree with Scorpion618 though. It sounds way better without the acoustic guitar. Keep it up, I love this song.

02-24-2007, 01:57 PM
I agree, The intro was to long but the rest was good.