[GP5] Hardcore C4C


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02-20-2007, 02:43 AM
Hey guys, please help me out here. im not sure what i can do to improve this song. I'm not a drummer or a bassist. But i thought i did well with the bass. hehe. anywayz just let me know what i need to do to improve it. Thanks guys.

02-20-2007, 02:51 AM
mine didnt work..o wait yes it did and also to improve it mayb u could use some harmonies and use of heaps of triplets like on the palm mutes and stuff

02-20-2007, 03:09 AM
here are some things i noticed and some suggestions

- it is really plain

- you should add lead guitar

- don't use so many repeats. add some fills(especially on drums)

- turn the bass up, it sounds good

02-20-2007, 08:09 PM
Why is the bass in Dropped D and the guitar in Dropped C?

02-21-2007, 03:02 AM
The bass in Drop D was a mistake and i have fixed it. But so far no way has actually commented on how i can improve the song. Be really good if someone could actually CRIT it properley.