[GP4-5+midi]Rock song intro

[Stolenidentity1]

This is my bands first song, the guitarist just called me the other day and i put it on guitar pro then made the bass (im the bass player)

I liked it but i wanted some comments on it

the last two bars are just something i slapped in there

[guitar_god22]

i guess for a first song thats a start

[RPotts]

It seems like there's a melody confusion. Is the bass playing lead, because it crosses above the melody of the guitar several times, a big no no in classical music, but then again this isn't classical, we get to do whatever we want to. It seems kinda boring, especially the guitar, the rhythm is repetitive. First all quarter notes then all eight notes. Mix it up a little.

[Stolenidentity1]

^lol you just a bass hater jk, this is just the intro to the song it will chang up anyway

Thanks anyway

[rodrigomierh]

i like it, its cool for an intro but please dont do the complete song like that, or it will be boring