[GP5] First Song ever! ;D


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02-28-2007, 08:19 AM
Im quite new in the songwriting part of the world, but here is the first song ive made, so some crits would be nice :D

Im planning to make some lyrics, but i need to know if the song is good.

Captian Xero
02-28-2007, 06:05 PM

The intro would be nicer if the notes rang out. but prttey good in all
I Liked the choice of bass notes.
the Solo guitar should have been distorted
the parts like 41-47 should have had drums
I didnt like the transition out of the solo

Other than that it was alright. For a first song, your doing better than some people i've seen on here. You should tighten up a few of those loose ends, and youll be fine

Captian Xero
03-03-2007, 10:56 PM
Alright. I wrote most of the updates in the song... I think i did a pretty good job with it.

03-04-2007, 03:30 PM
awsome work!! too bad i couldn't see that myself ;D

If just some more people wanted to crit it... :D

03-04-2007, 05:04 PM
Good work. There could been more riffs and more variations. I liked the solos, you are pretty good doing them :) I sugget for adding more instruments in this song ex. synth in the intro.
Wanna crit mine? link in the sig.