[GP5, MIDI] Instrumental Crit4Crit


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03-01-2007, 07:49 PM
So, me and the bassist from my band worked on an instrumental for a few hours the other day. It was originally a song with lyrics, but we decided to make it into an instrumental instead. Sorry if certain parts become boring because of this.

I'll crit4crit as always.

03-02-2007, 02:56 AM
Cool man..

I especially liked the part around 158...

But I think if youre gonna keep it an instrumnetal...u should cut out some of the repeats...but still, I like it, keep working on it

Plz crit mine...in my sig (expecially the metallica one, just put it up ysterday)

03-02-2007, 01:28 PM
Sounds like Iron Maiden...

03-02-2007, 03:39 PM
That was a really good song some of the solo at the beginning sounded a bit dodgy, and some over repeating of riffs. The rest of it was pretty darn cool though.

03-02-2007, 07:51 PM
some parts were a lil to repetative but still very good, id come watch you play it live lol

03-02-2007, 09:09 PM
meh, it sounded pretty generic to me, way too uninteresting to be an instrumental song... . the solo's were cool though, except for the tapping part in the last one, that just got irritating for some reason...

Crit mine?

03-03-2007, 12:12 AM
saddam your song is ****in insane dude thats my kind of music!

03-03-2007, 04:32 AM
wanna crit mine, go to the one in my second post its better:P

03-07-2007, 12:16 PM
Yea its a good concept but way too generic and repetative for an instrumental. The beginning solo sounded somewhat sketchy, but it was good.

I think for now 7/10

03-07-2007, 01:59 PM
I liked the intro solo, but i'd suggest you don't let the overdriven guitars notes ring into each other.
bars 29-60: Great riff but it seemed to drag on for ages, i can see you had lyrics here but i'd try and make this part a bit less repetative.
You're next solo is great.
But then back too the riff...If this is an instrumental i'd make this part a bit more interesting, it seemed pretty generic.
The next solo was great again, i loved you're use of natural hamonics.
The solo starting on bar 129 was excellent. I especially liked 133-134.
The solo does end really suddenly though, thats the only thing i can think wrong.

Crit my instrumental? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=8289476#post8289476

03-07-2007, 03:50 PM
that was awesome very metallica influenced i think? which makes it great the riff were metallica style i mean, the solos not so much, they were great loved the whole thing to be honest would like to hear it live ;) but yeah top noch composition.