[gp5] industrial metal


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05-02-2007, 05:10 AM
static x inspired...bit short at the moment and dont take too much attention of the drums. C4C

05-02-2007, 05:49 PM
Well, the drums were pretty good btw.
The riff sounded way too repetitive, and the bassline was kind of boring, maybe change that a little, specially when the chords start to being played, maybe add some bass thingy over there to make it more interesting.
However, I liked the riff at bar 37, that sounded good.
You could add another guitar to add another melody to the song while the first guitar plays the main riff, just to add some more variation and harmony...
Keep working...

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