a new bass song I've been working on


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lonejedio5
05-03-2007, 02:37 PM
Plz let me know what ya think.
C4C

devilscruffs14
05-03-2007, 02:50 PM
did you used to be a guitarist?

cuz that's what it seems like. becaus they notes are really high, and overall, it doesn't seem very "Bassy" if you know what i mean.

lonejedio5
05-03-2007, 03:14 PM
did you used to be a guitarist?

cuz that's what it seems like. becaus they notes are really high, and overall, it doesn't seem very "Bassy" if you know what i mean.

Haha yeah I know what you mean, alot of my band mates tell me the same thing all the time, I really get frustrated because they tell me the bass parts are 'too complicated' and they sound more like guitar parts.
But no I've never played guitar, I've never really liked it that much, maybe some day I'll get an acoustic, but I just write music that I like on my bass, not just funky bass lines, I like melodic stuff..

Deliriumbassist
05-04-2007, 06:39 AM
a couple of qualms. Try to stick to notes in the same key. The A# in bars 11 and 12 sound very out of place, for example. Also, the last 3 bars don't really do anything for me. A good attempt, though.

lonejedio5
05-04-2007, 09:06 AM
Alright thank you very much, I'll deff. try to fix that.

Deliriumbassist
05-04-2007, 09:27 AM
oh yeah, and crit mine? :D

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=579798

leo_p8
05-04-2007, 10:01 AM
Try to stick to notes in the same key. The A# in bars 11 and 12 sound very out of place, for example. Also, the last 3 bars don't really do anything for me.

My thoughts, exactly.

zakatak9389
05-04-2007, 12:39 PM
Thanks for the crit on mine man :cheers:

As for your song I liked it. I didn't sound too bassy like they said, but it still sounds pretty good. The only problem I have is in bars 10, 11, and 12. there were some notes that were way off key. Fix that and it'd sound much better.
Crit mine? (my new one's autumn tears, thanks for checkin all my other stuff, I appreciate it bro. :) )

lonejedio5
05-05-2007, 06:13 PM
Ok I've worked on it a little more.
BTW, seeing as it is only bass,
could anyone by any chance add guitars or any instrument that they feel would add to the overall song?
If anyone feels like it, I'd love to know what you guys would do with the song.......Thx.