[gp5] hardcore c4c


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BC_Joshlz
05-04-2007, 10:31 AM
just started workin on this.. want to see what people think of it.. c4c of course. thnx guys

EDIT. have added a lot more to the song. still not near finished off course.

WildthingJR
05-04-2007, 10:38 AM
Not bad, I especially liked the lick in bar 9 which immediately changed into this heavy riff. Overall, not bad, a bit too repetitive maybe.

Crit mine? (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=9132373#post9132373)

BC_Joshlz
05-05-2007, 06:19 AM
yeah that was just the first riff...i've added more now.

arcains_valor
05-05-2007, 03:46 PM
I liked it. What you should have done, though, is right after the second verse put in a second pre-chorus and chorus and then go into the "something".