[GP5, 4, MIDI] Another Acoustic (Weird)

[Chaperoni]

It's short, and weird, but I like it. I dunno.
It has an acoustic guitar, bass and then drums.

I wrote it in one session, which is weird for me.
I wanted a song that I had written, liked, and could play.
(I'm not that good at guitar, only been "playing" a few months.)
EDIT: It'd probably be better if I attatched the files...

[rodrigomierh]

sounds like tantric. anyway, i like even thought it is pretty simple, the only thing i didnt like was the verse riff, everything else is fine, oh and mabe another solo would be cool too. good job.

mind critting my new song? its on my sig thanks.

[Chaperoni]

Updated with some backing from an electric, with a spontaneous 4 bar solo thrown in for good (bad?) measure.

[gonzaw]

The riffs were good (the verse riff was a little boring, you should shorten it up, or add vocals), and some parts of the bass were good too. The first solo was good, and the random one, well, the first two bars sounded very good, but then it went crazy :haha.
It was good, crit mine? (in my sig)