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arcains_valor
05-05-2007, 03:30 PM
Ok. This is the first song I've ever put on here, so, yeah... I hope I'm doing it right.

Logan21
05-05-2007, 03:35 PM
I'm not a punk fan, if thats what it is, but it sounds really good, sounds like Gob :peace:

ShadowintheSun
05-05-2007, 03:40 PM
hey, thats pretty good that. Its not my type of music, but its good to listen to. if anything, its a bit repetitive but other than that, good effort,

7/10

if you want to crit mine, they're in the sig.

Captian Xero
05-05-2007, 03:46 PM
Thougts:

Make the Clean Guitar a Jazz Guitar...
In the verse I would have made each note have 2 bars...
Repeat 81-82 and make it play twice before going back into the verse. Then on the first time, make 82 two half notes, One being D the other B..

Other than that... it's pretty perfect... C4C?