Fire The Innocents [PTB, MIDI] [C4C]
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05-07-2007, 08:57 PM
Hello again :) This time, it's a song that I actually played before tabbing it, the real version can be found here: www.myspace.com/geschmackvollefruchte Fire The Innocents...
I decided to tab it with PTB, and this is what I got... Hope you enjoy!
C4C as always my friends!
05-07-2007, 09:54 PM
The intro riff was great, and I loved the harmony; and the next one sounded like Paranoid or something,.....it was great, really catchy,although I hope it has vocals cause you know about these type of songs, they get repetitive while you listen to them...
THe next part (the solo) had some off-key notes there if I'm not wrong, and was pretty nice and all that....
You should watch for repetitiveness, and more variation of the riffs, and maybe make that outro a little bit longer, maybe you could add another solo in there.
I liked it 7.5/10
Wanna crit another one from me ? (I know they are a bunch, but at least you have variety to choose from ;) )
05-07-2007, 10:08 PM
Yes it has vocals... but not writen right now xD!! But yea imma try to get some because it is repetitive. Cheers for the crit!
05-08-2007, 06:23 AM
It was alright in the beginning. The intro was pretty good, and I enjoyed the main riff the first 2 or 3 times I heard it, then I just got sick of it. The solo was alright, but like gonzaw said, it seems to have alot of off-notes. Overall, it was a good effort, but you need to add some variations to riffs. 6/10
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