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05-13-2007, 02:37 AM
Yeh, I know it's a bit repetitive and some parts need to be worked on, but I'm too ****ing lazy to change what I've already done.
Crit, crit, crit.
If you wanna improve/change anything, and you do so, post it so I can listen and see what you've done with the song.
I like the way it sounds already, yet some things need to be improved.

Go down to my second post for the GP5, GP4 and MIDI all-in-one zipped files!
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05-13-2007, 03:31 AM
post a midi or GP4 file so i can listen to it. thanks.

05-13-2007, 03:47 AM
I'm sorry, I should have included the GP4 and MIDI before, but I forgot to.

Here you go:

05-13-2007, 03:57 AM
that main riff/lead is awesome, really catchy, kind of gets me in a hyper-active mood. anyway i think you overused it, cause all the song its the same progression. You need to create new riffs, and parts, for example a breakdown, a chorus or verse riff, and maybe a solo would be cool too. anyway sweet riff, but better keep woring on the overall song.

mind critting one of my songs? they're on my sig. thanks.

05-13-2007, 04:02 AM
Yeh, I know, it's way overused, but it does hyper one up, huh?
Thanx anyway for the crit. I'll see what I can do about the friggin' song later. I'm way too drunk and tired to work on it now, maybe tomorrow.

05-13-2007, 04:22 AM
Sounds like Dragonforce to me, just slower, but very Dragonforcey :D