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05-13-2007, 10:23 AM
I owe credit to zakatak9389 for the drum beat and inspiration.It's my first time making a song like this and on guitar pro so hope you like it. I'm hoping to cover this song but well here it is. It's rather simple but i like it.

Edit: Here it is finished
Guitar Pro File ( Done.gp5) solo included now.
Guitar Pro 4 Version ( Done.gp4)

05-13-2007, 02:29 PM
I like this. Great solo! It fits really well with the song. I didn't really like the part at the beginning when the guitar cut out. But the harmony part was good and the interlude after the solo was great.
Good Job!

05-13-2007, 02:36 PM
Thanks mate :D btw the names are because my band is gonna play it.

05-13-2007, 04:49 PM

05-20-2007, 10:00 PM

05-21-2007, 01:24 PM
It's not really the type of music I listen to, but the riff sounds awful familiar but what it sounds like I can't fathom. This is just from my point of view as a bass player I would do something more than the same rhythm on the root note all the way through the song, try and mix it up.

The solo was good, probably the best part in the song from me.

Crit mine?:

06-19-2007, 12:09 AM
Hey guys just wanted to know if i could get some more feedback on this song because I'm trying to get my band to play it but there like its to Hardcore for us....we're a pop/punk band and i really don't think this is like hardcore for us at least.

06-21-2007, 05:11 AM
I love that dude!

The intro melody rocks, real atmospheric. The lead sections were imaginative, a nice change from the usual shred shred squeal leads you see in songs.

The solo was cool, real melodic and fitting, then the part following on sounds killer. Ending with the fadeout was a brilliant idea.

Beautiful song!

06-21-2007, 07:38 AM
pretty good song too :P so here is my other worrk crit if have time ppls
""I don't know how to call it-ish Metal (many solos)"" dunnu how to giva a link :(

08-17-2007, 05:10 PM
I'd crit your song, but the link isn't working?

08-17-2007, 08:36 PM
Damn lol this one um let me find it...k

08-18-2007, 12:48 AM
the groove was pretty infectious, other than that, song was basic, simple and sweet. I liked the solo, tho I would have been nicer if it were louder even a delay effect could sound nice there.