Need Help Writing a Solo for this Metal Song


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USCENDONE BENE
05-13-2007, 04:32 PM
Previously posted as 'Uncompromisable Time', but i deleted the thread when i realised i had uploaded a much older, incomplete version.

anyway, id appreciate if you could look at the solo for the song and fiddle around with it, or change it all together. IMO it really sucks and needs changing but im out of inspiration, and im not a great solo writer anyway. I used the Scale Arabic in D to make it a bit more interesting, but it doesnt work :(

C4C as always, if you feel like just rating this as it is, coz thats fine :)

thanks

vIsIbleNoIsE
05-13-2007, 04:51 PM
the opening is great. but i think you should put more variation throughout, maybe add more melody over it - leadwork doesn't just belong in the solo!

Nirvana-Man
05-13-2007, 04:58 PM
The drums sound kind of cheesy....

USCENDONE BENE
05-13-2007, 05:02 PM
The drums sound kind of cheesy....
probably because i have never played drums in my life :peace:

USCENDONE BENE
05-13-2007, 05:03 PM
the opening is great. but i think you should put more variation throughout, maybe add more melody over it - leadwork doesn't just belong in the solo!
i was just thinking about putting some more leads in...

fragydig529
05-13-2007, 05:06 PM
I only changed the solo and the verse after it.

USCENDONE BENE
05-13-2007, 05:13 PM
I only changed the solo and the verse after it.
thats fine, much appreciated :D

ubernooblet06
05-13-2007, 05:42 PM
Heres my attempt. Not that great at writing metal solos but i tried to blend hammett, wylde and dime.

kylendm
05-13-2007, 06:07 PM
Damn uber i liked that a lot even though not the creator. in my opinion that was the best solo for it yet.

ubernooblet06
05-13-2007, 07:21 PM
Added Intro Solo and Pre-Chorus melody hope u enjoy

USCENDONE BENE
05-14-2007, 11:04 AM
thanks very much to ubernooblet06 and fragydig529, i will use your ideas to make my own :)

BFMV fan
05-14-2007, 09:36 PM
it sounds like a song for a video game, but y use that scale?