[GP5, Midi] Untitled hardrock song


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05-15-2007, 01:46 AM
This is a simple and easy hardrock style song, that i started making a little while ago. Its not finished and every time i listen to it it changes a little bit :) drums have been under constant changes...
Criticism very much appreciated, be honest with it :) im a beginner when it comes to making music, and i really want to develop so please tell me what you really think even if you want to rip it into pieces.
Its easier to develop when someone points out our flaws :)

GP5 TAB: http://www.sendspace.com/file/32vyhn

MIDI : http://www.sendspace.com/file/ou66ba

05-15-2007, 12:41 PM
first: post your stuff directly in to the forum, its easier and you will get more crits, i was too lazy to download the file the first time a saw the post. if you don't know how, just ask. ;)

Anyway, Your song is a good start but, you need to keep working on it, I think it is completely repetitive as it is the same riff over and over only with small variations over it. You need to come along with new riffs to use for the different song sections (chorus, verse, solo etc.) and how to join them. i can't really crit much else because, as I said it is only one riff. :peace:
have fun, and don't rush the creative process. the more ideas you have, the easier it will be! :cool:

Ps. the riff sounds a lot like "let the bodies hit the floor " by Drowning pool

mind critting one of mines? thanks.