Short Metal Instrumental - another one. [GP5 + MIDI]


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05-25-2007, 10:35 AM
Okay, so I posted a instrumental here a little while ago, and after taking on your crits.. I endeavoured to fix it.

I couldn't.

But I ended up starting a whole new song.

I think it's better than the last one.
What do you think?

I'll crit for crit.


05-25-2007, 10:49 AM
I really liked it.


05-25-2007, 10:50 AM
As did I. Some parts are better than others, but as a whole, it's good.

05-26-2007, 01:21 PM
Damn, this is some quality Metal. The part at verse 6 and 7 freaking owns. I think you could add some vocals to this, this deff. has metal anthem written all over it.
Deff. try to add some vocals, I think heavier songs like this are better suited for vocals than slower songs. I deff. love the solos, and theres so many of them. Good stuff man, the bass interlude-type thing is sweet too. I do think you could have ended the song a little differently, maybe end it with a solo playing on top of the verse.
Good stuff overall man, 8.5/10.

Crit my newest one plz?
the first one on my signature. thx

05-26-2007, 02:02 PM
intro solo was great but the bends sounded off? :confused: the riff at ten was a headbanger for sure :headbang: and a 17 then the solo was great i liked the descending sweeps they sounded awesome.

the riff at 38 was genious and the riff after it :eek: definitely teh best riff in it really enjoyable man kept me interesting teh whole way through