Country/Metalcore Song (unnamed) GP5


PDA

View Full Version : Country/Metalcore Song (unnamed) GP5


jakemac
05-31-2007, 08:06 AM
The chorus is kind of country style the intro is metalcore style as is the verse. It isn't finished but I just wanted to know if it was good instead of carrying on with a boring one. Thanks.

ClosedCasket
05-31-2007, 06:37 PM
Sorry dude, but I didn't like that... the country bit just sounded like a bunch of flies in a jar, and the metalcore riffs were ok but borin. Sorry...

jakemac
05-31-2007, 06:44 PM
Oh its ok it's all part of the game... no hard feelings..k ??

bakshandloomis
06-11-2007, 04:25 AM
i liked the verse, but not so much the chorus, and the solo could use some work, maybe not sweeping the WHOLE time?

Thefallofman
06-11-2007, 01:24 PM
Needs more drums, less tempo changes and more transitions I think. It just kind of seemed like random riffs thrown together. It's not unified like a song at all.