Rock keyboard GP5 plz Crit 4 Crit :D

[hracjk]

Its a work in progress, but plz say where it needs improving, or whatever

Rob

[teatine]

http://www.pink-martini.org/missions/liens/link.php?m=1&l=1&u=7&k=1q5I0e5licY2VpbrMeOJ7Lhf6Vu5L

[gallagher2006]

http://www.pink-martini.org/missions/liens/link.php?m=1&l=1&u=7&k=1q5I0e5licY2VpbrMeOJ7Lhf6Vu5L

Huh?

[leo_p8]

^ ^ ^ Ignore him.

Hey man, I'd like to see you finish this and re-post it... while your doing that, though, keep in mind that the synth isn't a guitar... and it has a different function within music... so: Let your guitars do the basic leads and have the synths do their job: harmony (through bass tracks, accents, fills, or even another lead). Just do your best to have both guitars doing something... because what's the use of two guitars if they both do what one could do on it's own?

The actual material is decent, and you should definitly take the time to finish it. I (personaly) finish every song I start... and even if I don't like the final version I'll show it to the band so they have a complete understanding of where I wanted to go with it... then they can make educated adjustments or outright changes to it as they see fit for the band as a whole.

SO... FINISH IT!