[POWERTAB] ofelia and the pale man.


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Grovermans
06-03-2007, 10:26 PM
i think it's pretty good.

i'm going to try to write lyrics for it soon.

HeavenlyVirus
06-03-2007, 10:43 PM
that was awsome, just don't ruin it with some whiny emo lyrics.

SGxMastodonxSG
06-03-2007, 10:46 PM
that was awsome, just don't ruin it with some whiny emo lyrics.

Uggh, this post brings frowns upon my face.
I really liked it, as well. I don't really see anything I would change. Great job.
The outro was pretty damn cool.

Grovermans
06-03-2007, 10:53 PM
Uggh, this post brings frowns upon my face.i knowwww it upsets me too :(

but thanks guys.

Nunwhxre 666
06-03-2007, 11:30 PM
I. Absolutely. LOVE. This peice. You have really outdone yourself on this. I have already listened to this song about 4 or 5 times. It never gets old. It's pure genius.

10/10. AMAZING work done here.

gravewatching
06-04-2007, 06:14 AM
nice with a lil inspiration of pans labyrinth that movie is amazin bro

gonzaw
06-04-2007, 07:28 PM
The intro piano was great.....
I also liked the guitar part......a contrast from the last part....
Those slides are great too....
And there is a pacman sound or harp in there that adds nice harmony too...
At 40 or something over there there are nice riffs....well, in fact...the whole song is full of good riffs......
I only wish you used the piano a bit more.....

Anyway.....great song 9/10 :)

Crit mine? (in sig.....on of the last 4 if you can :) )

Grovermans
06-04-2007, 07:33 PM
well there are two guitars and a keyboard.
i can't really put a piano part along with
the synth parts, cause they'd both be
played on the keyboard, and they'd both
have to be played at the same time.

i mean. my keyboardist is talented,
but he's not jesus :p:

Valo
06-04-2007, 08:47 PM
You have this song recorded with your band man?

Grovermans
06-04-2007, 08:50 PM
nah.

i don't actually have a band;
just a keyboardist. haha.

Valo
06-04-2007, 08:50 PM
hahaha
that's awesome, good song btw; pretty goddamn catchy.
get a band started... pronto.

HumanitysDeath
06-04-2007, 10:04 PM
I dunno.
The keyboard seems a little over dominant.
I like it in some parts, but it doesn't fit with the usual Grover style I'm used to.

Overall, I'd say it's pretty good.
Just not my favorite.

ExplorerFreak
06-04-2007, 10:34 PM
I adore this film!

Grovermans
06-05-2007, 07:24 AM
I dunno.
The keyboard seems a little over dominant.
I like it in some parts, but it doesn't fit with the usual Grover style I'm used to.

Overall, I'd say it's pretty good.
Just not my favorite.in the chorus?

yeah i was kind of worried about that,
but i really wanted the keyboard melody
to be heard clearly over the two guitars.

Thefallofman
06-05-2007, 01:11 PM
Everything's already been said, so I won't get redundant. Nice job... but are you trying to spell "Ophelia"?? If so, you might want to fix that. Spelling errors don't really draw people in to want to hear songs. Keep up the good work.

Grovermans
06-05-2007, 03:08 PM
1) it can be spelled either way.
2) in this case, it is spelled this way.

but thanks.

Drewski2113
06-08-2007, 01:40 PM
it sounds like the mars volta to me, which ties in with the whole pans thing because of the spanish.

i like it alot.

drew

Stephen00000
06-09-2007, 05:28 PM
I really liked this like i like most of all ur other stuff. It seems full of depth and harmony - very rich music if u understand what i mean. Has good flowing riffs together then a rampant chorus. I just wish some of your songs could have guitar solos cos they would sound so good with the progressions you come up with.
Well done!

PS - i got a song up "Powertab Funk song" at the moment- comments appreciated.