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Amuro Jay
06-05-2007, 03:36 AM
i wrote this peice today, needs some crit and suggestions. its kinda metal ish, and its kinda fast.

http://www.box.net/shared/f8myxyeqxl

SGxMastodonxSG
06-05-2007, 04:24 AM
What's with people not attaching the files?

I didn't like it. Sounds like every other metalcore song. I guess if you like that, whatever floats your boat. The breakdown was pretty cool, though.

Amuro Jay
06-05-2007, 04:28 AM
thanks for listening... u got any suggestions for it? like what to put next?

SGxMastodonxSG
06-05-2007, 04:44 AM
thanks for listening... u got any suggestions for it? like what to put next?

Ha, looking back at my post I kinda think I was a dick. Sorry if I came off like that, just voicing my opinion. Other people here might like your song, it just wasn't for me.

Anyway, I don't really have any suggestions because there was almost nothing about it I liked, besides the breakdown. But then again, I've basically disowned metal recently, with a few exceptions (Opeth, BTBAM, SikTh, etc.)