Beginning to New song (GP4/GP5/MIDI) [Metal]


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kylendm
06-06-2007, 09:07 PM
Yea i was bored so i made this little beginning to a song. Tell me what you think :D

Use GP5 sounds better imo

phatjohnson16
06-06-2007, 09:13 PM
I like it.

kylendm
06-06-2007, 09:15 PM
Thanks :P

Sharkuzzi
06-07-2007, 11:16 AM
Hey, nice! I think there's nothing wrong with it, and I enjoyed it, really! If you wan't, you can change only the last chord in bar 4, 8, etc. from 0's to 5's, it sounds better IMO. :D Good work on the drums. :)
Keep up the good work, I'm waiting for the whole song.
Crit mine? In sig. :D

kylendm
06-07-2007, 09:27 PM
yea it sounds ok but i think its fine how it is thanks anyway :-)

kylendm
06-19-2007, 03:39 PM
well i worked on it more i added a solo part but i need to work out the end it needs that kind of umph that ends a solo good but well heres that part.

ElBarto2811
06-19-2007, 05:10 PM
Just perfect, I'd like to give you some advice of how to improve the song, but I can think of nothing. Really nice.

kylendm
06-19-2007, 06:01 PM
thanks mate :D

Haha guys i'm just in a metal mood today heres a better solo and harmony now.

Also GP4 and MIDI

kylendm
06-19-2007, 10:11 PM
bump

khamett
06-21-2007, 07:34 AM
the intro solo thing is f...ng awesome, but i dont knoe why the others did not make it too great, but still it is pretty good song, especially the first solo! 7.5-7.7/10! good work

khamett
06-21-2007, 07:35 AM
**** thefirst solo is great! i listen to it 10 or 12 times now!

kylendm
06-26-2007, 11:06 PM
Well i made some adjustments hope its somewhat better.

NightWingMafia
06-26-2007, 11:18 PM
wow awesome.. cool solo, drums were great

hzac
06-27-2007, 01:39 AM
Im a huge shadows falls fan and i think this song is right up thier / my alley. It has some good hard riffs that sound cool without being to technical.. and i like that. lets you jump around on stage and still play it correctly :P The intro solo/lead really fit in well with you rhythm. I think your going to have quite a song on your hands. :)

Please crit mine. it would be much appreciated.
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=614140

Jonjy2
06-27-2007, 03:27 PM
Haha dude thats awesome!

I really like the that starts at bar 21...

The solo kinda kinda got annoying after a while but still really good stuff :D

9/10

plz crit my latest song? In sig :D

kylendm
06-27-2007, 04:04 PM
Sure thing

eddiehimself
08-29-2007, 03:37 AM
this is a really mint song. I'm actually gonna keep that. You might want it recorded with real instruments if you know what i mean ;)

vinguler
08-29-2007, 05:54 AM
pretty good stuff you have here.
i liked it, catchy and kinda heavy.
the solos are good, but not really my taste.
the rythem is very good, and they change perfectly.
i cant really say more about the song, since this part is kinda finished.

i hope to see this continue.
8/10.

btw, if you have time, plz check out my songs in the sig
(i prefer the last ones).

British_Steal
08-29-2007, 02:27 PM
yayy! something different kinda

the intro is cool but you kinda ruin it with the melody

and you need to expand on that theme more like make it different but still the same if you know what i mean

personally i think you had the right idea with the intro, some catchy metal that's still heavy. that's the direction you started in and should keep going in no more melodic metal
because i just can't handle the same thing over and over
once thing, make the intro more interesting rhythmically and head with that style of metal, groove metal i think it's called

anyway good luck

Crit mine? (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=661782)