"Behind" - 'Melodic' Indie/Alternative Rock (GP5 GP4, MIDI)
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06-08-2007, 09:13 PM
Well I write a lot of songs, I think this was an old one maybe number 10 but it's still one of my favourites, and I thought I might see what my fellow UG'ers thought of it as I've only shown a few musical mates a few of my songs. Hopefully you like it as much as I do, not to be big-headed though, I'm talking about pride in my work.
No vocals right now but I try to make songs that work as instrumentals.
Thanks. C4C of course. :cheers:
06-08-2007, 09:21 PM
I can tell you put a lot of work into it, nice job.
I don't know if it'd fit my tastes though. Solo is nice.
06-08-2007, 10:21 PM
It's really relaxing. It was surprising, I love how you added the effects on both guitars. really creative. The chorus is really good, the verse, i like the rhythm but the lead is... awkward a little bit.
The solo is really good, fits the mood.
9/10, it's very well-thought out and well done.
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=602608 C4C? ^_^
06-09-2007, 02:12 AM
The guitaring was great. Both tracks worked well with each other. But i muted the effects..... I really didnt like them.. The verses were good and calm but got kind of boring at the end of the third one because they were such logn verse with a short chorus, but with words they probly wouldnt get bring. the interlude solo suited the mood very well. Bridge was great and 'cute' in a way but liek the verses went for a little too long and because it was very simple and repeatative it got a little boring. End solo was good, looks like you spent alot of tiem on it, and going back into the bridge for the outro worked well.
Rate mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=602270
06-09-2007, 06:02 AM
Wow this was really good. I don't think there was anything I didn't like about it. For some reason it gave off a AtD-I/Cap'n Jazz vibe, don't know why. Would be cool with those style vocals.
06-09-2007, 09:06 AM
Wow, thanks a lot all of you, that's some nice feedback. I may change some things upon reading this, like the FX, length of verses and bridge. Nothing too drastic because other people liked them, but yeah thanks all of you, I'll get to work on listening to yours now.
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