New Fusion Song (Funk/Metal?) Crit for Crit


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JimmyPage97
06-12-2007, 02:12 AM
Hey, I'm at it again.

Tell me what you think.

:D

Constructive criticisms please, tell me what I could do better, but most of all...

Tell me what you liked, haha

Go back to my old threat "New Bundle of Experimental/Fusion songs" to get an idea of what my sound is.

Check out: "Ultimatum" - that's my newest one.

As always, provide me a link, and i'll crit you as soon as i can :)

-JP97

bakshandloomis
06-12-2007, 02:15 AM
i thought it was pretty good. the solo could use a little work i think. it was a bit repetitive but it was good a riff so that didn't bother me. other than that i liked it.

c4c?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=604402

rodrigomierh
06-12-2007, 12:18 PM
I think you should work on the solo, because it doesn't stands out, also the intro gets a tad repetitive. i liked some of the transitions between verses and chorus, and the main riff is cool, just don't use it too much. cheers

mind critting one of mine? (choose from sig) thanks.