Untitled Song[GP5, GP4, MIDI, C4C]


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guitarhero_764
06-13-2007, 10:53 PM
Hey guys, I was messing around with my guitar this morning and accidentally played this riff lol, I thought it sounded cool so I put it on GP and added a harmony and a solo(not a very good one).

So yeah, tell me what you think, and about the solo, I'm horrible at making them, so if you don't like just mute that track.

MIDI: http://www.uploading.com/files/KMYQW4BK/mystery_song.mid.html
GP4: http://www.uploading.com/files/GWUWRVZE/mystery_song.gp4.html
GP5: http://www.uploading.com/files/96U34CNH/mystery_song.gp5.html

I have to do it like this because the manage attachments doesn't work on my comp...=P

BrokenDstring
06-13-2007, 11:07 PM
good riff, but your "song" is very repetitive and kind of annoying

guitarguy5515
06-13-2007, 11:08 PM
Well I realize you were just putting this down, but, the main riff was a little boring and monotonous, not to mention repetive. Not horrible though. The other riff...well it made no sense to me. Drums might add something but you need to change up the riff to make it a little more exciting. And finally, the solo. It was either experimental or random. You just used the same pattern and moved it up and down the strings. Well either way, I can't play it. Just keep workin.

zakatak9389
06-14-2007, 01:33 AM
Well, man, I think I'm going to have to be truthful here. This was terrible. The riff was extremely boring and repetitive. And it didn't even seem like the song was even in a key. Learn how to write in a key man. And the solo was just God aweful. It was just random notes throughout. Sorry man, I'm not trying to hurt your feelings, but if I just say that it was the best thing i've ever heard, then you'd never improve. Good luck man. :)