New Metal Song [GP5, GP4, MIDI]


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06-17-2007, 08:54 AM
I've been playing around with this song for a few days and I like it.
Very Headbang-ey. lol :p:
It's Metal, but I'm not sure what type..
Anyways, enjoy :]

EDIT: Slightly changed it :peace:

~Loki <3

06-17-2007, 09:19 AM
it is heavy, il tell you that for free. lol.

i like it.

06-18-2007, 06:26 AM
Haha yea ;p
S'posed to be heavy :p:

~Loki <3

06-18-2007, 07:21 AM
It sounds kind of thrashy... sort of Lamb of God meets Generic Harcore Band to me.

It's far too repetitive for my taste... you should at some more diversity to the actual riffing and not just vary the note patterns... it all becomes a blur by the 30th bar. I think your drums were quite effective, but should be used to fill the sound a little more... you wan't "heavy" right?

All in all... it's decent... but far too simple/boring for my personal taste.

06-20-2007, 03:26 AM
I changed the drums a bit and I love it :]

~Loki <3

06-20-2007, 04:24 AM
Pretty good, but I don't like the riff that comes in at bar 38. That and the octave slidey bit after that didn't sound too great. But other than that I really liked it. Like Chimaira LoG type thing.

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06-20-2007, 07:55 AM
I actually didn't find it repetitive at all, and i think you have done a wonderful work with the drums! It really adds to the song.

Maybe you should try something else instead of the otave slide thingies, i didn't like them so much really. I cant see anything else you can do better in your song .

I think it stands out from the rest of the boring metalcore songs around here. :wavey:

Want to crit mine? (although maybe not your genre but whatever :) )

06-20-2007, 08:25 PM
I actually think (no offence here) it's a Slipknot clone song with some badly placed riffs, especially the octave slide. The sawtooth could have added originality, but instead added a mess.

The riff was heavy-ish, but was repetitive. The thing that makes other heavy riffs better is the diversity, variations etc.

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06-22-2007, 12:06 PM
Incredibly generic.

Use more than 4 notes and it'd be alright.