My metal song #2 [GP5, MIDI]


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sam b
06-18-2007, 10:32 AM
Hey,
this is another song i wrote and thought i may as well post it.

i would just say the genre was metal... not too sure about the subgenre :confused:

Please give your honest views, if its sh!t please say so :)

One of my mates said the main riff reminds him of pantera.. i can't see it myself, but whatever...

Crit away....:D
Thanks
:cheers:

Oh, by the way, the GP5 version sounds alot better than the MIDI

dreamshot
06-18-2007, 10:44 AM
I thought it was pretty good, but i think it should have been an actual recording....but other than that it wasnt bad.

Eladamri
06-18-2007, 10:45 AM
I rather like that actually. but it could do with losing the metalcoreish bridge and a slightly more interesting arrangement.

Jonjy2
06-18-2007, 10:55 AM
Yea... :)

Not bad at all I liked it :D

Good riffs. It actually kinda reminded me of Bodom in the verse riff :D

The bridges were ok. I liked the other riffs better but every song is like that, where i dont like one part and do like the rest...

5/5

(Crit mine plzz?) EDIT: In my sig

dsaanm
06-18-2007, 03:17 PM
This one is also good but I prefer the first one
Good creativity

michal23
06-18-2007, 03:32 PM
I quite like this song. I mainly like the riff you use in the chorus, and the two bridges. Though I think you could do something a bit more interesting with the verses, otherwise you will have to have lyrics that will draw ones attention completely!

crit mine?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=9629387#post9629387