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Jaridv
06-18-2007, 02:45 PM
this is a metalcore song i wrote its not finished but constructive crits would be nice

michal23
06-18-2007, 02:51 PM
Hmmm, must say not really my type of music tbh, but I really liked the part just before and just after the breakdown, it stopped the song from being a bit too reptitive. IMO, anyway. Crit mine?

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=9629387#post9629387

Jaridv
06-18-2007, 02:54 PM
Hmmm, must say not really my type of music tbh, but I really liked the part just before and just after the breakdown, it stopped the song from being a bit too reptitive. IMO, anyway. Crit mine?

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=9629387#post9629387
i know its too repetive i havent written any more riffs yet for it but thanks for your comment and your song is really good i like your use of bells and pianos its really full sounding

Nihil
06-18-2007, 02:56 PM
it sounds very much copied off of unholy confessions

Jaridv
06-18-2007, 03:01 PM
it sounds very much copied off of unholy confessions
hmm..i did notice it sounds like the main riff played backwords but im not finished yet and i still need to add to it

Nihil
06-18-2007, 03:02 PM
yeah, change it around a bit and it'll be good

Jaridv
06-18-2007, 03:06 PM
yeah, change it around a bit and it'll be good
thanx for your opinion