found another one (metalcoreish) (GP5/4/MIDI)

[kylendm]

Well i found another song in my collection of stuff i did over the past year. i cant believe i forgot about it. It has some cool riffs i think and the drums are kinda eh but i thought i was an alright song. =P

[IndieLee]

You can feel the rhythm in this, apart from in bar 13, it's as if you're going a steady pace then you hit a rock/wall/big object, etc.

Still listening and coincidentally my guitar is in Drop C.

[kylendm]

So other than that part it was alright?

[IndieLee]

Yeah, it was good.

But I would say to improve on it. It could be better, but it is good. :)

[screamingchinky]

I'd say it's kind of boring and to predictable. I think it needs more rhythm changes and a lot more variation on the riffing. I kept playing back the next bits in my head without having heard them to begin with.

Any chance you could crit the arrangement of Toccata and Fugue? Be as harsh as you want. I plan on improving it.

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=681532

[kylendm]

bump =/?

also updated it for a better solo, fills, and unfinished bass.

[kylendm]

Well here's probably the last update I'm going to do so here goes. Please crit guys. :D

[Red989]

It was to slow for my liking, not tempo wise, but I'm getting into a lot more heavier, faster stuff. Still not bad for an attempt though.