Anorexia (GP5, GP4, MIDI)


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jolleymuse
03-25-2008, 06:47 PM
This is the song I just wrote today because I had nothing else to do and was in a creative mood. The lyrics are on the vocal track and ive tryed to get the right rythems for the vocals but they aint perfect, but the instruments are the main thing im bothered about. Any comments/advice would be great
cheers

AdmnGt
03-25-2008, 09:03 PM
Very good song. I enjoyed listening to it. Even though the solo was a bit short.

jolleymuse
03-26-2008, 11:03 AM
thanks for the comment

lexieangel
03-26-2008, 11:07 AM
i like it alot :)

Matt.Chavie
03-26-2008, 11:17 AM
Nice, the lyrics were great. Why'd you write about an anorexic? It's funny. The synth bass helped it a lot. Good job.

jolleymuse
03-26-2008, 11:21 AM
lol cheers. You see the thing with the lyrics is that my friend has seriously thin legs and arms so i thought id write a song about it :)

Ziggums
03-26-2008, 11:26 AM
A good track, sounds similar to a few muse songs.

I really like the synth.

Crit the one in my sig?

xxCHANCExx
03-26-2008, 03:07 PM
I liked the song overall. The only bad thing I though of, was that the lyrics were kind of cheesy at some parts. I liked the chorus though, and the vocal track overall was pretty good. Guitar parts were sweet as well, and way to stray away from typical basslines! The synth bass sounded really cool. Good job overall 8/10. Keep it up.

jolleymuse
03-26-2008, 03:17 PM
thanks!