Ten Thousand Live (Rock) (Midi, PT)


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Ziggums
03-27-2008, 09:01 AM
This is my Second song now. I've ended up writing it twice because the first time around it sounded nothing like what I wanted. Anyway, C4C as usual. Also, Any ideas on what Genre it is?

Carl6661
03-27-2008, 10:12 AM
MIDI's never do justice to anything IMO.

But from I can hear, it's pretty cool!

I like the way you've used the bass for something more than root notes!
:D

Some of the doublestop? type chords sound a bit off.

And sometimes the bass has some sour-notes.

Also being powertab, there's a lack of drums :(!

Overall, 8/10

Ziggums
03-27-2008, 10:14 AM
MIDI's never do justice to anything IMO.

But from I can hear, it's pretty cool!

I like the way you've used the bass for something more than root notes!
:D

Some of the doublestop? type chords sound a bit off.

And sometimes the bass has some sour-notes.

Also being powertab, there's a lack of drums :(!

Overall, 8/10

If i had Gp then i would of added drums, I'll have a look into any off notes, I thought something sounded a bit off, Thanks!

danilo19
03-27-2008, 12:46 PM
I think you may need to look into rewriting correctly as far as timing and that stuff goes. I don't know you level of playing but I think some lead would make this a lot more interesting. Your rythm at times was kind of akward as well. Keep working with it man.

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=13499585#post13499585
crit mine? thanks

CapnKickass
03-27-2008, 06:59 PM
This is one of those songs where I can't really think of much to say. It's good, though there isn't much substance to it, which is fine, but it is kind of boring. The bass line was nice. There's a lot of openness in the song that leaves room for vocals or drums I suppose. With a bit more work it could sound pretty good.

crit mine?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=751920