broken sweep(gp 5.2,gp 4, midi) metal


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03-27-2008, 09:20 PM
New song,
Give me some pointers :)
Probably not final version.

03-27-2008, 09:27 PM
sounds like a badass old nintendo soundtrack :)

03-27-2008, 09:37 PM
I hear hella BTBAM influence. Pretty cool.

03-27-2008, 09:38 PM
That was awesome. Sounds like a better version of dragonforce haha

EDIT:^ I thought I heard some BTBAM and Protest the Hero possibly.

03-28-2008, 12:47 PM
totally the human abstract lol

Burning Raths
03-28-2008, 01:09 PM
Pretty good. I liked this.

03-28-2008, 01:35 PM
I loved all of it but it didn't flow well at all. It was too fast and some parts didn't join together well.

03-28-2008, 11:12 PM
Wow That was impresive, Like above posters said, sound like you been influence by the techcore bands (BTBAM,Protest the hero, The human abstract). I realy like it , and it got something most songs lack....AWESOME bass, especially the lil fills. Realy good job.

Oh yea the only thing that buged me was the ending..could have manage a bit of drum and bass but overall its all good


03-29-2008, 01:32 AM
Intro is pretty catchy, although measure 6 doesn't filter into the next riff very well. Measure nine sounds childish, making the gorgeous sweep before it pointless. Oh my, 12 to 13 and 15 to 16....oh my, love it. The breakdown is pretty bad ass. The chuggy section works well, wish I could here it with better tone. I don't really like 46 to 60 for some reason, seems to random. Then again it sounds just like Between the Buried and Me and I love them.

Not much to say about the rest.
I like most of it though.

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03-29-2008, 11:48 PM
Totally BTBAM, anyone else hear a very Alaska inspired riff at the start? Very good musically, you're clearly pretty proficient at theory.

Thanks but I didnt write this, a band member of mine wrote it , yes he very very very proficient in theory, he writes symphonies, all the theory he uses just hurts my head, and hes only 15. I am just posting here for feedback. We are probably going to change it around a bit, make less random parts. Ill pass on your message :)