Just a riff....[GP5, GP4]


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03-29-2008, 07:54 PM
It's been awhile since I've posted anything, so I'm just gonna post a small part that I started last night. It's kinda boring IMO and it just kinda repeats over and over again in different keys :p: but I'd like some feedback on how I can spice it up.

guitars pretty lacking in coolness I think.
bass was taken from another song I've been doing. :)
and the whole thing started with the drum beat which is pretty sweet I think. *shrug*

but any comments would be awesome. :cheers:

Jonathan Trejo
03-29-2008, 07:58 PM
Yeah the factor of awesomeness is lacking in there lol. But the drum beat is nice. Doesent fit with the riff. Maybe add some rhythm then yull get some where hehe. Its an ok riff thow. Maybe try playing in dropped c lol . or dropped d anyway it can use some work. c4c http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=823979

07-16-2008, 01:00 AM
I actually like it, except for the drumbeat. Bass pretty groovin`, too.

07-16-2008, 01:15 AM
whoa! this came back. :p:

drum beat was just boredom/wankery by me anyways. haha. and I turned something out of it.

Edit: and I added a rhythm part awhile ago. Here it is. :cheers:

and it seems as though volumes and pans are a bit out of wack so adjust those to hear everything okay. :)