Melodic Screamo? [GP5, MIDI]


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reaper_x
03-30-2008, 01:09 AM
Hell Yeah.
Wrote this in one day. I think it's my best piece, so far.
The riffs are pretty straight forward, but sounds good
as hell. I MAY give it to my band to play.
I Need to know what you guys think. :D

[2 Guitars, Bass, Drums]
C4C!! ;)

To The End
03-30-2008, 01:17 AM
i think the break section sounds pretty good

the drums in the chorus sound a bit wierd and the whole thing just gets to repetitive

in the intro maybe u could harmonize those single notes

flea_is_my_god
03-30-2008, 01:19 AM
wheres the screamo? i like your bridge but verse and chorus are repetative and rather bland

xwearesinking
03-30-2008, 05:24 PM
its really repetitive and the riffs are sort of boring.
maybe you should take more time to write a song next time, put a bit more effort into your riffs.

Matt Chavie
03-30-2008, 08:46 PM
It was uber repetitive, and kinda generic sounding, nothing said "I WROTE THIS!"

PinkIsCool
03-30-2008, 09:04 PM
Really generic. Most of your riffs sounded the same, or have been done before.

Burning Raths
03-31-2008, 04:09 AM
Sorry to say, but it was a little boring... Same thing over and over again. No soul and no emotions...