A2 comp (GP5 + midi)


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maisey ferret
03-30-2008, 11:11 AM
Ive already done a electronic synth based composition. and this is my 2nd comp. written to fit into the "popular song" catagory.

struggling with vox line the most. all feedback welcome. enjoy.

szekelymihai
03-30-2008, 11:27 AM
well sincerely i dont really understand the "fills" in hardcore songs. cause they sound so out of tune(for me)then, the song is quite good:D

BKGMorley
03-31-2008, 05:34 AM
well sincerely i dont really understand the "fills" in hardcore songs. cause they sound so out of tune(for me)then, the song is quite good:D

Thats the whole point

psychotim
03-31-2008, 11:37 AM
Pretty sweet song. I like the chorus very good, but i felt like there was something that could be improved there, dont know what though.
Also like the vox lines, theyre a little different i think, except in the chorus, they're good, but not that unique.
Your breakdown is sweet, but i think you drag it out a little too long.