Some song I wrote


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04-02-2008, 06:28 PM
Here's a song I just threw down in about 15 mins... C4C.... If it's really crappy, let me know :D

Jonathan Trejo
04-02-2008, 06:42 PM
the first couple of riffs are great. The sweeps i didnt like so much cus those notes are used too much. Change the sweeping section. other wise its a good 15 min start. Spend more time with it and post back with more... c4c

04-03-2008, 06:45 PM
The file is full of incorrect bars - two many notes in the one bar.